One day at Alexander's house, His family threw out a birthday party in the backyard. Alexander invited about 6 of his friends over. But the moment he called his brother, He hung up instantly. Alexander's brother was being mind-controlled. He was being controlled by an evil scientist who had no name. Alexander's brother was called Jason. Alexander was 16 and his brother was 11 years older than him. Jason used to have blue eyes but now they are glowing red. Jason was dragging injured bodies in his car. The evil scientist was making him murder people. Jason was also drunk and had 40% of his life left. Back at the party, all of Alexander's friends were there.
(sorry but this is unfinished :3)
Thursday, 15 November 2018
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Hi Mark it is Niamh here I like how you put discribing words in and and told us there names. One thing you can work on is make it more sensibility
ReplyDeletesensibility? what do you mean? :3
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