Today for Cybersmart, we were working in duos on a topic - Quality Blog Comments. On a slide, there was a comment on a blog post. We tried to type a comment that is better quality then the comment on top. For example, there was a comment on a blog post, and it said "I liked the T-shirt that you made I liked the stuff on the T-shirt" which to me, wasn't a quality comment. So my buddy, Stan, tried to remake it. It turned out...well...not really better. he wrote: "Hi i really like your T shirt i really like the photos do you wanna improve your t shirt tho like add some words add some like a good Advice or some thing? And great job!"(copy and pasted) I MEAN BRO GET YOUR GRAMMAR RIGHT!!!
Anyways, I did the comment for the next one. It was a pretty good comment to top, but I think I topped it.
Here is a screenshot of it.
How do you think I did?
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