A few days ago we were gonna plant a seed and we made some instructions:
I am a student at St. Bernadette's School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 31 May 2018
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good effort make a comment to me
ReplyDeletethx stan ;)
DeleteHi Mark Good work with your how to plant a seed But i think you need more information but i like how you said sun because you need a sun of course but everything else is really good good effort Mark
ReplyDeleteOh ok thx manuk :D
DeleteHey Mark, I have seen that you have made a really good job, I liked how you putted pictures too that relate to your instructions. It reminded me of when me, my Dad and my Mum did some gardening and the steps that you put were exact the same of how we planted are vegetables. Next time you could work on not putting something in bracets and also not putting PS because I don't know what that means.
ReplyDeletethx for the feedback kylie :3
DeleteHey mark I liked the way you showed how you make a plant Did you think aboud doning a littel bit more writing in your work Next time, you could put some water because plant needs warter and my question is how long did it tack to find the piturs
ReplyDeletelike 5 mins or so
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