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Friday, 29 June 2018

Our School

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                      Our school


In our school we’ve got 136 people, 2 offices, 15 staff,
1 staff room and 2 clubs which is breakfast and cultural club.
We have 3 playgrounds, and 2 parking lots. We’ve got 7
teachers and 132 children. The C.E.R.R values are Compassion,
Excellence, Responsibility and Respect.
We have a church that is being rebuilt because we have to
fit more people in. We have the church hall for church in
some days. We have a big field and 2 courts. There are gates
in all the parking lots. We’ve got 3 big trees and lots of small
trees beside the third playground at the fence. We’ve got 1
principal and his name is Mr  Norman. We’ve got 8 rooms in
the whole school. For P.E we’ve got a P.E shed. We’ve got 2
decks beside each classroom. In room 8 we have kiwi can.
In room 2 we have choir. In room 6 we have cultural
club and in room 7 we have breakfast club.
In the field we’ve got 1 rugby post. In the park
we’ve got a sandpit. We’ve got 1 prayer garden
which is beside the gate.
Next to the classes, We’ve got a library.
Next to the teacher car park we got some wooden
cylinders which has Māori greetings on it.
We have a big chess board next to the school gate but
we don’t play checkers with it anymore.
Next to that we have a small bench.
We also have a little bench for waiting for the bus.
(I go on the bus with some of my friends) When we walk
down to the bus stop there is a lot of red trees on the side
and plants or bushes on the other side.

The End

16 comments:

  1. good work mark but more more!

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    2. Stan, what should i do more? i think I've got enough. Maybe...you should add some information on that comment.

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  2. good work you have been working lots good work you are graet

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    1. Thx Tyler for the reply
      maybe you can tell me what to do more next time:)

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  3. Good work i like it

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    1. Thank you Cameron and maybe you can ask me what to improve on :3

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  4. i like your work that you have done

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    1. Thank you Caleb for the reply and next time you can tell me what to improve on :D

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  5. Hey mark Did you think about adding some color in the words.
    I liked the way you made the writing really long.
    Next time, you could think about adding the colors in the school.
    My question is you could do a bit more full stops.

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    1. actually your full stops are great. what do you like the most about the school though?

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    2. the playground :D

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  6. sorry for saying more more mark will you forgive me?

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    1. um why? i'm fine with the comment.

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  7. by the way ilkie the way it is

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  8. Stan don't u mean i like*?

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